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| Crystallas |
 Posted: Sep 03, 2009 6:44 am |
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クラゲ, 流れ星
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Rodri wrote: Quote: Singer: Guy (c'mon, try to find the appropriate passage ) 
What do you mean by that  ? I mean the "" smily... |
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| Rodri |
| Posted: Sep 03, 2009 11:38 am |
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クラゲ, 流れ星
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Location: Quito, Ecuador
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^ I meant it to be a cough  |
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| Crystallas |
| Posted: Sep 03, 2009 12:12 pm |
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クラゲ, 流れ星
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Okay, whysoever ...
edit: post to short  . |
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| Rodri |
| Posted: Sep 03, 2009 1:22 pm |
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クラゲ, 流れ星
Joined: 14 Mar 2007
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Location: Quito, Ecuador
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^I meant the song isn't for a guy's voice
It's too high (and too low in some parts ) |
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| Koda |
| Posted: Sep 03, 2009 4:32 pm |
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クラゲ, 流れ星
Joined: 27 Oct 2008
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Location: Still on Mars
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^ haha, you never know Rodri  some guys have different voice types  Crystallas, your song is very very nice, as I've told you before.
I guess I'll post another song then if no one else will. I'm actually quite proud of this one, I like to think it's my most significant work yet.
(ps: it's a cover of misono's "Zasetsu Chiten").
"Re: Myself"
Isn’t the human mind amazing? We all need one to work
But we don’t know it works, we cruise life on the verge
Of falling apart each and everyday, we wish it would go away
At the same time we don’t, it’s the irony, right?
CHORUS 1
Isn’t it ironic when you lose? Like being forced when you could choose
Like meeting two doors that in the end would lead to only the same way
There’s a way out if we look inside, within ourselves so many answers hide
There’s a maze inside your heart, don’t let go, don’t let yourself fly all apart
Change my life
The maze we live in changes everyday, we never see the way
We never seize the day, we always ride the wave
And though you fight, you're not the hero; you're behind the scenes
How the hell does that work? You deserve it, don't you?
CHORUS 2
Isn’t ourselves we love to hate? We’re either too early or we’re too late
Can’t believe there’s nothing to hide, that we have to love ourselves with our pride
Isn’t it ironic what we gain? The sweetest misery for an hour of fame
In this world, there's so much to face; from the starting line is where we lose the race
Illusions, something real
Inside this city I can’t find a way, inside my own head I can’t hesitate
There’s gotta be an answer to this, there has gotta be a way to survive this mess
REPEAT CHORUS 1
REPEAT CHORUS 2
Reply myself; forward ahead
How long is it until I can find myself?
Singer: male
Speed: fast for the chorus, a little slower for the verses
Style: rock |
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| Rodri |
| Posted: Sep 03, 2009 4:45 pm |
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クラゲ, 流れ星
Joined: 14 Mar 2007
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Location: Quito, Ecuador
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great lyrics!!!
I know..but what I meant is that the rythm of the song is more for a girl..don't know how to explain..
I can reach the highest parts of the song..but the verses are just to low |
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| Crystallas |
| Posted: Sep 04, 2009 6:02 am |
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クラゲ, 流れ星
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Location: Germany
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^ Haha, I have no problems to sing the song. Some guys have a high voice too  ...
Well, I absolutely LOVE Koda's lyrics. They fit well to the song, sound simply great and are so deep and have a cool meaning  . |
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| Koda |
| Posted: Sep 04, 2009 2:01 pm |
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クラゲ, 流れ星
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Location: Still on Mars
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| haha, thanks you guys about the voice thing, I was speaking generally--my voice can't go very high or very low, it's a bit sad but I'm sure there's someone out there. |
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| Crystallas |
| Posted: Sep 14, 2009 1:25 pm |
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クラゲ, 流れ星
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Location: Germany
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haha, new songtext. it isn't a cover, the text just reflects me feelings right know. i hope you can't finde to many mistakes . here you go:
Songtitle: ♪tears♪
Singer: guy or girl, it doesn't matter
Style: ballad... i guess
Speed: slower
i see my reflection in the window
impassive, just like that
Slowly my eyes red from crying
are looking in the raining world
i have no umbrella to put ob
but to the honest, I really don't care
i think I will go to bed now
just to cry a little more
i still gaze to my reflection
do i really look so paltry like that?
Slowly my eyes wet from crying
are looking in the wrongful world
maybe i should go to her
and tell her „I didn't meen it like that“
maybe i should wash my face
the tears cling on my cheek
what do I really need to own?
What could i even leave behind
maybe this ruing feeling
but i really have to sleep now |
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| Koda |
| Posted: Sep 14, 2009 3:42 pm |
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クラゲ, 流れ星
Joined: 27 Oct 2008
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Location: Still on Mars
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It's very heartfelt, Crystallas I can imagine this person lying down in bed, sighing deeply at the sound of the rain striking the window...powerful imagery. Lovely
This song is a little older...a lot older I wrote it in like, May or something. It's a cover of "black&white" by misono. I wrote a lot of whiny songs back then to be honest, and this was one of them
KANON - From That Day
It’s so easy to say you like someone when you
Need an excuse to have some attention
If love is fed by people who experience it
Then real love’s on a diet
Falling out of love ain’t the same as falling into it, ‘cause you drop
For a shorter time and when you crash, it hurts a lot less
It’s so simple to say you want someone to hold
Until the daylight morning comes
The challenge is living with that disease
And having nothing to hold
Fall out, believe that it isn’t true, just feel that no one is there for you
Make someone the biggest part of your life and then tell them to leave
Give them all you are; all you’ve become so far
And then let them walk away
Fall out, believe that love is a lie; believe that without them you’ll die
Give someone everything that you are, tell them, “tear out my heart”
Give them all of yourself, all you are; all that you’ve become so far
And then let them walk away for good, that’s what real love is like
The sweetest memory; the greatest searing pain
Because I loved you, I learned to hate myself |
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| Crystallas |
| Posted: Sep 20, 2009 2:08 pm |
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クラゲ, 流れ星
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Location: Germany
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I updated with some new Lyrics:
Songtitle: ♪Lock and Key♪
Singer: girl / guy with a high voice
Style: ballad
Speed: slow
We are all longing for love, We are all dreaming of a better world
Take it apart, and fix it again - I locked the door and opened it again
We can't get the keys befor our journey, we have to find them by hard
to unlock the door which leads too our destination
The answers are always a step ahead from us
The questions are leading us stray in a maze, stray in a maze
We are looking on the other way, We are blaming others for our mistakes
Take it apart, and fix it again - Maybe you get a brand new thing someday
We are looking on the same things, but we see them in different ways
You think you know who I am. But nobody knows who I really am
We can't get the questions on our way, we have to find them by hard
Let us try to think laterally
The answers are always a step ahead
The answer is leading us stray in a maze |
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| Crystallas |
| Posted: Oct 24, 2009 3:54 pm |
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クラゲ, 流れ星
Joined: 29 Apr 2008
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Location: Germany
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New lyrics by Crystallas-san
Songtitle: ♪Your Skies♪
Style: ballad
Speed: slow
I bury my heart in the sand, together with the memories
of you and the time we spend together this summer
So deeply and madly in love
I look at all the photos again and it seems that I can hear
our laughter from that day again in my ears
Whats going on with me and this world?
I thought my voice would reach you
My dreams are leave me like the last train
You are somewhere above this big sky
The fireworks drops down like a petal
But I know that I shouldn't be down in the mouth
The dark night sky reflects my memories
of our youth we spend together
I raise my hand and I hope to reach you
in the sky so faraway
I sit under a tree and I open this album again
and talk about my childhood, as if I would talk to myself
Nobody knows what's at the end
of this long and fateful journey
You are somewhere above this cloudy sky
The fireworks drops down like the rain
But I know that I shouldn't think of you all the time
The gloomy dawn sky reflects my memories
of our story we wrote together
I raise my hand and look up to the stars
Do you want me to see you again?
Please tell me if you found any mistakes! |
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| Koda |
| Posted: Nov 21, 2009 10:10 pm |
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クラゲ, 流れ星
Joined: 27 Oct 2008
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Location: Still on Mars
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Wow, people have just forgotten about this thread.  Well, I think it's cool so let's just keep going
"Unlimited (Fast-Crash Ending)"
a cover of "SUICIDES LOVE STORY" by Nana Kitade.
Singer: Male with a large range
Style: Rock ballad
Speed: Slow
Your heavy chains are coming off
Nothing holding you back down here anymore
You always said, you’d say to God that you would
Find a way to tell me that you’re home
Made a promise in November
That if anyone we used to know, we saw up there
Take a picture, send it back here
Glad to know you’re doing well, but I’m still stranded on Earth
CHORUS
I scream out, I’m so alone
And when I do, a feather falls out of the heavens
Falling fast, nowhere to go
Falling underwater, no way to know
Oh, why’d you have to go? But why’d you have to go?
Don’t tell me… or I will break
You told me that you’d never go
And I said, “don’t make a promise you can’t keep.”
But still I said I’d find a way to make this
Last forever; sickness and in health
Made a promise in December
We’d find out if even butterflies were up there too
Take a picture, laugh at that proof
Glad to know you’re doing well; you never sent those pictures
REPEAT CHORUS
I still know you in my dream
When the nightmare’s over, I don’t scream, not anymore
I scream out, I’m so alone
And when I do, the storm breaks up inside the heavens
Falling fast, nowhere to go
If I fall toward you, then I’d know
So why’d you have to go? So why’d you have to go?
Well, you’re free… unlimited sky |
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