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| yuko |
 Posted: Jan 07, 2006 9:45 am |
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ユメクイ
Joined: 24 Jun 2005
Posts: 1141
Location: italy
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Did u ever try to write the lyrics for a song? no? write one now it's easy ^ ^ and post it here...
but dot forget to wtite:
Singer: (girl - boy - band - other..you can also write a name es. Ai Otsuka)
Style: (j-pop, j-rock, visual-kei, etc)
Type of song: (slowly, quik, other)
If you want u can also create a cover for the cd of your song....
Who wanna start? |
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| yuko |
| Posted: Jan 07, 2006 1:23 pm |
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ユメクイ
Joined: 24 Jun 2005
Posts: 1141
Location: italy
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Sorry for the double post 
I wrote it now.... I think it's funny but not good 
I think the singers are a few girls of 14 years old... or 16 maybe.....
the song is really fast and it's j-pop
I’m feeling so right today (HO!)
My happiness will never stop (happiness)
Let’s go!! (GO!)
I wanna take a purikura with you (you)
What’s the color of your clothes?
Yellow? Pink? All are really nice Colors, yeah!
What’s the color of your hair?
Green? Really? I think it’s cool, WoW!
I wanna live in Wonderland with you
Your’ re my love pure pure pure kokoro
I wanna fly in a baby pink sky
And just for us…
I don’t know tears, I don’t know sadness
When I’m with you I don’t know what’s the loneliness
Which do you like more?
Sun? Rain? I like both, so nice, yeah!
Which do u like more?
Boys? Girls? Really I don’t care
I wanna live in Wonderland with you
Your’ re my love pure pure pure kokoro
I wanna fly in a baby pink sky
And just for us…
I don’t know tears, I don’t know sadness
When I’m with you I don’t know what’s the loneliness |
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| Lainay |
| Posted: Jan 07, 2006 2:42 pm |
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ハイパーガル
Joined: 21 May 2005
Posts: 641
Location: USA
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| Should we write them in Japanese or English? I LOOOOOOOOOVE writing lyrics, I've been writing lyrics and songs since I was like really really really widdle! ^_^ |
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| horizon180 |
| Posted: Jan 07, 2006 3:01 pm |
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SMILY
Joined: 26 Oct 2005
Posts: 495
Location: Manchester, UK
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yuko, i can so see momusu doing your song  kawaiiii
@lainey - u write in jap too? i have some in jap.. i wonder if i should add them here... |
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| yuko |
| Posted: Jan 07, 2006 4:54 pm |
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ユメクイ
Joined: 24 Jun 2005
Posts: 1141
Location: italy
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> Thanks horizon180
> I'm sure Lainay is really good  please post one here ^ ^
The lyrics can be written in japanese, english or a random words of english n japanese toghether Like tommy's songs  |
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| horizon180 |
| Posted: Jan 07, 2006 8:01 pm |
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SMILY
Joined: 26 Oct 2005
Posts: 495
Location: Manchester, UK
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Here is one of mine that i wrote in Japanese.
Song Title: 生きている [I'm alive]
「生きている」って
そんな気がした
初めてそんな風に笑った事なんだ
夢の青より
もっと青空
初めて涙乾いて、もう流れないんだ
太陽が、伝わる、
刻々、西に動く、
潮を、聞いてくれ
君に、何が叫ぶ？
何時も、どこでも、何度でも
僕が君をきっと守る
「生きている」って
そんな気がした
初めてそんな風に歌った事なんだ
夢に見たどおり
美しいな笑顔
初めて、悲しみが幸せに変わったんだ
手を上げて、抱きしめて、
君の気持ち伝えてくれ。
君はもう、１人じゃなく
孤独のは、ただ忘れ物さ
僕をぎゅっと握り締め
愛を心に刻んで
「生きている」って
そんな気がした
初めてそんな風に愛した事なんだ
夢にいた人
やっと見つけた
今日からずっと永遠まで手を離さないで
「生きている」って
そんな気がした
初めてそんな風に歌った事なんだ
夢に見たどおり
美しいな笑顔
初めて、悲しみが幸せに変わったんだ
「生きている」って
そんな気がした
初めてそんな風に愛した事なんだ
夢にいた人
やっと見つけた
今日からずっと永遠まで手を離さないで
-- Romanji --
(chorus 1)
ikiteru tte
sonna ki ga shita
hajimete sonna fuu ni waratta koto nanda
yume no ao yori
motto aozora
hajimete namida kawaite, mou nagarenainda
taiyou ga, tsutawaru
kokkoku, nishi ni odoku
oshi ni, kiite kure
kimi ni, nani ga sakebu
itsumo, dokodemo, nandodemo
boku wa kimi wo kitto mamoru
(chorus 2)
ikkiteru tte
sonna ki ga shita
hajimete sonna fuu ni utatta koto nanda
yume ni mita doori
utsukushii egao
hajimete kanashimi ga shiawase ni kawattanda
te wo agete, dakishimete
kimi no kimochi, wo tsutaete kure
kimi wa mou, hitori ja naku
kodoku wa tada wasuremono sa
boku wo gyutto nigiri shime
ai wo kokoro ni kizande
(chorus 3)
ikiteru tte
sonna ki ga shita
hajimete sonna fuu ni ai shita koto nanda
yume ni ita hito
yatto mitsuketa
kyou kara zutto eien made te wo hanasa naide
repeat 2, 3
--Translation--
(chorus 1)
"I'm alive"
is how I feel
This is the first time that I'm smiling in this way
The blue of my dreams
An even bluer sky
This is the first time that the tears have dried and aren't flowing
The sun flows through the sky
Hour by hour, towards the west
Listen to what the tide is saying
What is it shouting to you
Whenever, wherever, however many times,
I will definately protect you
(chorus 2)
"I'm alive"
is how I feel
This is the first time that I'm singing in this way
Just like I saw in my dreams
Your beautiful smile
This is the first time that sadness has turned into happiness
Give me your hand, hold me tight
Tell me how you feel
You're no longer alone
Solitude is just something that you've forgotten
Hold me firm and tightly
Carve your love on my heart
(chorus 3)
"I'm alive"
is how I feel
This is the first time that I've loved in this way
The person who was in my dreams
I have finally found her
Forever till eternity, don't let go of my hand
Repeat Chorus 2, 3
--fin--
Singer: a guy/a girl (either, making appropriate changes)
Style: Jpop
Tempo: (slow-medium paced, happy
i wrote this about 4-5 months ago... it still needs work.. the japanese needs to be polished slightly ... a work in progress if u will...
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Last edited by horizon180 on Jan 11, 2006 12:33 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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| chiakifoil |
| Posted: Jan 08, 2006 1:54 pm |
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上塩タン焼680円
Joined: 30 May 2005
Posts: 351
Location: in ai-chan's dream
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wow. you guys are real song writiers ^^
Yuko, that song makes me hyper and happy, i looove it 
and horizon 108, that song makes me feel alive, like it said in the song  i love your guy's songs. the sound like songs that aicha would have 
when i go to highschool next year and learn japanese, i will surley translate it to japanese
it sounds rediculous in english..
but i'm sure it will sound cute in japanese with a little instruments and stuff ^^
because my friends and i have a band
i have a song that i wrote: it was written a looong time ago when my boyfriendwas really not talking to me anymore, and i wanted to write a song to show him how i felt.
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song by:me!
title: surley and truely (sadameshi&shinko)
type:happy, love, soon to be Jpop
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if you soon remember the charm we had.
if you will remember the rainbow we watched that one day.
we watched it form.
you might see how i love you, and why.
you yelled at me over the phone.
but i still love you, because you said 'sorry'
we are 2 lovers displaying the same smile,
and hand in hand, we both know we'll make it.
chorus:
surley and truely. we'll be together.
as a cute couple, we will walk in the park.
we'll make them constantly turn heads.
they will see that we are perfect.
i can even remember the time when i tripped!
i tripped; i was embarrassed.
i will remember that time, because thats when i saw you smile.
you said 'are you alright'
and i tried so hard to hold back the tears of shame.
chorus:
surely and truely, we will love one another.
as a cute couple, we will hold hands and laugh at eachother's jokes.
i will definently smile and pull you closer.
i think; i know that we are perfect.
bridg:
i can even hear you smiling.
when i'm on the phone with you.
not a boring love life!
i love you!
surley and truely. we'll be together.
as a cute couple, we will walk in the park.
we'll make them constantly turn heads.
they will see that we are perfect. |
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| Pini~! |
| Posted: Jan 08, 2006 3:42 pm |
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さくらんぼ
Joined: 17 Oct 2005
Posts: 42
Location: Barreiro - PORTUGAL
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| Ohw i love to write lyrics too but I always write them in portuguese Guess I could post them anyway and then write some translation |
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| yuko |
| Posted: Jan 08, 2006 4:25 pm |
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ユメクイ
Joined: 24 Jun 2005
Posts: 1141
Location: italy
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>>> Thanks chiakifoil I'm glad u like it <3 I loooove your lyric!! It's too cute...and powerful
<<< WoW the horizon lyric is really well done japanese version too ^^ cool
>>>I wanna read one of pini-chan too please do the translation
I like read lyrics LOL |
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| horizon180 |
| Posted: Jan 08, 2006 5:52 pm |
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SMILY
Joined: 26 Oct 2005
Posts: 495
Location: Manchester, UK
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thnx for the praise guys...
nice one chiakifoil, i dunno but i keep thinking that youhna would do as a good choice of singer for your song.. ^_^ if u ever record it in the near future, be sure to post up an mp3 here too... |
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| depressant |
| Posted: Jan 15, 2006 1:27 pm |
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ネコに風船
Joined: 11 Sep 2005
Posts: 507
Location: Malaysia
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I wrote a lot of songs since i was 14 until when i was 19. Quite running out of ideas nowadays... I have wrote 2 songs for one fren of mine upon request. And this is the second part. I composed it with easy guitar. I cant get the symbol for "flat" so i just put it in "sharp"... the song is in F major, but i used a few of borrowed chords though.
Eye Shadow part.2
Intro – E-7, C, F, G
E-7
Dressed with the flesh
C
From thirteen days of loneliness
F
She could not hide from Her sadness
E-7
Behind the moon when She was fated
C F
The snuffed candlelight
G
Ran dim in Her sight
Fmaj7
Eye for an eye
E-7#4 D-7 E-7#4 A-7 A#-7
Bleached inside, drowned slowly at Her side
Fmaj7
The beauteous
E-7#4 D-7 E-7#4
Of red evening skies, and pure graven lies
A-7 A#-7
Hid in the senseless night
Fmaj7
And kissed with
E-7#4
Her cold frozen lips, tapers in eclipse
D-7
Mourned for the untouchable shadow
Fmaj7
If pain was the gain, with the October rain,
E-7#4 D-7 A-7 A#-7
What’s left when all the tears turn into liquor and dispersed
Fmaj7 E-7#4 D-7 A-7 A#-7
When She weeps…
E-7 C
Revealing the veiled face and now She embraces
F G
The only soul attached to the uncontrolled faith
Fmaj7 E-7#4 D-7 A-7 A#-7
When She weeps…
E-7 C
Relieving the hurt of being glamorous and precious
F G
Watching the roses as Her fate goes reversed
And this is the longest one i've ever written. I wrote when i was 18 or 19...
Gothic based lyrics, since i listen to a lot of black metal, besides J pop...
Staccato Romance by Moonlight
The sound of tears dripping
Behind the delicate stars
A mist of labyrinth
Covers my sight and the dusk
There’s nothing inside
In the aria of dark
And I found Her in a tempest of cark
Under the midnight skies
I held my hand with Hers
The liquor of tears revealed
By the cold blue moonlight
We stared each other in this holly night
She whispered to me with Her frosted lips
My shadow couldn’t let go everything I gripped
Herein our eyes shut, She moved closer
And took everything to one step further
The howling of the sea lulled the wind of fears
Nymph of the darkness, beatified with me…
“Dear pathetic, what can you see when you clung to me?
Your fragrant soul enchanted my will
Passionate kiss beside the dark sentimental sea
When the moon glowed with blue fire
Harmonize my crescendo desire
We can fly together to seek a pace of symmetry”
Awaken, haunted by the poisoned dream
Another systolic illusion by the bloodletting requiem
Whispering slowly like a shadow around me
Inflicting my fragile skins with misery
I, enchanted and confused
In a sea of questions, answers lost and seduced
Tempest-tossed, slit my wrist with the punishment cherished
And I, endeavored to bury Her from mind
This scarlet spell burns with passion, divined
Consuming my black scorched pain endlessly
Waiting for the signals to cease the torment
Her voice revived everything that she burned
Forlorn mind undeceived from the words she returned
I taste my sorrow with my hollow skin
She hides, from the words She mesmerized
One hour, I can’t wait to see Her
Being one of those who couldn’t have Her
In front of my mirror is an inferior
Seeking for a road to be together
Nothing seems to be better than nothing
“Jagged wounds taste my tears
Overcome my rued chords
Just listen to my fears
Once again before my belief rots”
She left with a mordant fog
Swallowed everything she felt within
Standing all alone in the fate of in between
I can only taste my sorrow with my hollow skin
That's all folks! |
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| chiakifoil |
| Posted: Jan 27, 2006 9:16 pm |
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上塩タン焼680円
Joined: 30 May 2005
Posts: 351
Location: in ai-chan's dream
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woooow!
depressant, those lyrics are awesome o.o
i love it ^-^
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heres my song 
i got really bored..wanted to write something...blah. its about..you guessed it..december XD well, by reading the lyrics, its pretty obvious o.O
well, winter's my favorite month..and i never want january to come. this is about how every time my favorite thing comes around..its gone again 
like i said, i was bored, so its not like its supposed to be all good
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artist:me
genre:soon to be jpop
title:whipe your eyes, december
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whipe your eyes december.
remember i'll miss you.
i know you dont wanna go december.
i promise, i can never forget.
oh december.
how i long for you.
oh dember.
my pretty eyes so blue.
oh decmber.
Mrs.snow-white.
oh december.
i'll be by your side.
holding onto every second of december.
this is not as much as i can take.
i almost cried for you december.
please always remember my name.
i tought those words of wisdom.
i tried to learn your way of skipping years.
i knew i could fly.
every second was alive.
i held your hand, and eveything wnt cold.
oh december.
how i long for you.
oh dember.
my pretty eyes so blue.
oh decmber.
Mrs.snow-white.
oh december.
i'll be by your side. |
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| HachiRoku |
| Posted: Jan 28, 2006 1:52 am |
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Happy Days
Joined: 08 Jul 2005
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| wow dese are awesome you guys are really good writers. i wish i could write but im not very good at it. |
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| kikubelle |
| Posted: Feb 26, 2006 5:42 am |
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ユメクイ
Joined: 27 Jul 2005
Posts: 1026
Location: Toronto, Canada + Lalaland~
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wow
now i really want to write a song too
horizon
good job im so proud of u
i know ur not japanese n ur writing it in japanese @-@
gambatte minna
i will write one n post one later |
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| chiakifoil |
| Posted: Mar 03, 2006 7:59 pm |
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上塩タン焼680円
Joined: 30 May 2005
Posts: 351
Location: in ai-chan's dream
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artist:me
genre:soon to be jpop
title:Dream
can anyone guess what its about?
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the first snowflake falls
and his nose is pink.
its kind of cute how he is all bundled up
the first melody of the wind
plays me a tune at night
i sigh and sofly sing a long
the song of winter
the first thought of his voice
the coldness of that one december..
oh i definently remember his voice
he asks me why i'm angry
i tell him its the cold
he lends me his jacket
that night i thought of his eyes.
his smokey eyes smiled gently
and his face stayed in my dreams
the song of winter
the first thought of his eyes
it was a very cold december
oh i definently remember those eyes
dreams can tell a story
a sad story of love
if you lose track of that dream
keep on sleeping, and it will come back.
i looked out the window, and the sun was up.
there was no more snow on the trees.
i walked home from school, and you werent there.
i walked home from school..and you werent there. |
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