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| mitsuboshi |
 Posted: Oct 24, 2007 2:39 pm |
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桃ノ花ビラ
Joined: 24 Oct 2007
Posts: 5
Location: Sweden
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So this is my first time ever that i have drawn a picture of Ai 
I'm pretty happy with it. Please tell me what you think, onegaishimasu!
Sorry for my bad english
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| Googoodolls |
| Posted: Oct 24, 2007 5:16 pm |
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甘えんぼ
Joined: 03 Mar 2007
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| It's really good. I think the huge eyes are really distracting (not bad)...but overall, I like it. |
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| tadabelle-paaan |
| Posted: Oct 25, 2007 7:54 pm |
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ネコに風船
Joined: 20 May 2007
Posts: 555
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This is good for your first time! 
But I think the hands maybe too small and the eyes are a bit distracting. Its good overall though.
Anyways..keep up the good work |
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| ultratails |
| Posted: Oct 25, 2007 9:11 pm |
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ネコに風船
Joined: 07 Jun 2007
Posts: 543
Location: In My House
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It's really good, you are great at drawing.  I would like to comment that the hands are a little too small, but overall, it's wonderful. |
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| Negaiido |
| Posted: Oct 26, 2007 11:20 am |
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上塩タン焼680円
Joined: 23 Oct 2007
Posts: 331
Location: The Netherlands
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you can draw really good but it doesnt look like Ai-chan 
The Face is just not her, sorry |
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| Rei-chan |
| Posted: Oct 27, 2007 12:06 am |
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さくらんぼ
Joined: 14 Jul 2007
Posts: 32
Location: Philippines
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| It's nice...but I think the hand is a bit smaller. But I like it. |
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| Jester |
| Posted: Oct 27, 2007 5:16 pm |
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フレンジャー
Joined: 27 Feb 2006
Posts: 843
Location: Canada
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Wow, I like it. It's kind of a cross between a caricature and anime.
If that's what you were going for then you've done a good job, especially for your first time. |
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| mangomalte |
| Posted: Oct 27, 2007 7:57 pm |
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クラゲ, 流れ星
Joined: 10 Oct 2006
Posts: 3582
Location: Sweden
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ah, i saw this over at Hello! Online.
i think it looks nice, and it's most definitely recognizable. you've gotten all the face proportions right, although as the other ones said, the hands/fingers are a bit small. |
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| Rodri |
| Posted: Oct 27, 2007 8:16 pm |
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クラゲ, 流れ星
Joined: 14 Mar 2007
Posts: 13481
Location: Quito, Ecuador
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It's really good!!!! I like it!!
The only thing I would like to comment is her hands...they are too small...take in mind that hands correct proportion is the same size as face.. |
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| mitsuboshi |
| Posted: Oct 28, 2007 4:48 am |
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桃ノ花ビラ
Joined: 24 Oct 2007
Posts: 5
Location: Sweden
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mangomalte wrote: ah, i saw this over at Hello! Online.
i think it looks nice, and it's most definitely recognizable. you've gotten all the face proportions right, although as the other ones said, the hands/fingers are a bit small.
Haha  I know you from there too
Yeah, I'll think about that next time. But thank you |
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| mitsuboshi |
| Posted: Oct 28, 2007 4:51 am |
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桃ノ花ビラ
Joined: 24 Oct 2007
Posts: 5
Location: Sweden
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Rodri wrote: It's really good!!!! I like it!!
The only thing I would like to comment is her hands...they are too small...take in mind that hands correct proportion is the same size as face..
Thank you  Your answer made me really happy
and I will keep that in mind until next time.
Arigatou~! |
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| mitsuboshi |
| Posted: Oct 28, 2007 4:53 am |
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桃ノ花ビラ
Joined: 24 Oct 2007
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Location: Sweden
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Jester wrote: Wow, I like it. It's kind of a cross between a caricature and anime.
If that's what you were going for then you've done a good job, especially for your first time.
Haha I wasn't aiming for that
But I've been drawing manga since way back.
Thank you |
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| mitsuboshi |
| Posted: Oct 28, 2007 4:57 am |
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桃ノ花ビラ
Joined: 24 Oct 2007
Posts: 5
Location: Sweden
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Negaiido wrote: you can draw really good but it doesnt look like Ai-chan
The Face is just not her, sorry
It doesn't? Oh ok.
Then what do you think i should change?
Thanks for your reply by the way |
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| Negaiido |
| Posted: Oct 28, 2007 5:37 am |
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上塩タン焼680円
Joined: 23 Oct 2007
Posts: 331
Location: The Netherlands
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i don't know
But the eyes are certainly not hers |
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| Danieru |
| Posted: Oct 28, 2007 3:53 pm |
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桃ノ花ビラ
Joined: 21 Oct 2007
Posts: 19
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| Well.. you draw a lot better than I do! .. I like it.. ooooh . you're from Sweden.. niiice.. From Norway myself been to Göteborg so many times! [ Bra Bilde! ] |
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