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| bahamut88 |
Posted: Apr 17, 2007 11:49 am |
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上塩タン焼680円

Joined: 04 Jun 2005
Posts: 347
Location: Singapore
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Here my first attempt of drawing Ai Chin.
How is it?
(I don't know how to draw the woolen beanie.)
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| Heisei |
Posted: Apr 18, 2007 11:31 am |
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上塩タン焼680円

Joined: 19 Mar 2007
Posts: 375
Location: Prague, Czech Republic
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I like it, except theres something strange about the mouse position, maybe it´s because of the shape of the chin or so. You could maybe play a little bit more with the hair and the light reflex, but still, very nice job. Hope you´ll try some more
edit: Ah yeah, and you forgot to finish the right shoulder (right from the Ai´s view)  |
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| bahamut88 |
Posted: Apr 18, 2007 11:41 am |
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上塩タン焼680円

Joined: 04 Jun 2005
Posts: 347
Location: Singapore
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| the picture didn't include the right shoulder. Haha. And my imagination is very bad. |
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| mafee |
Posted: Apr 18, 2007 3:24 pm |
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上塩タン焼680円

Joined: 04 Jan 2007
Posts: 346
Location: Bangkok
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ํำYeah, the mouth looks a bit strange. And the hair should be more volumized. As a whole my comment is like Heisei's. What I would like to add is that I like the eyes' part (not including the eyebrows). ^^ Keep on nice work!
And as I've stated somewhere here, i myself am bad at drawing...  |
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| cheRish<3 |
Posted: Apr 18, 2007 9:55 pm |
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Happy Days

Joined: 02 Mar 2007
Posts: 123
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| ^agreed, I like the eyes too =). For a first attempt I think your drawing's great! =D |
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| .::carlito::. |
Posted: Apr 19, 2007 3:54 am |
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クラゲ, 流れ星

Joined: 14 Oct 2006
Posts: 3609
Location: Melbourne, Australia
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For a first try, that is great! The mouth needs a bit of working but it's very impressive for a first try! Keep it up! Maybe you'll become much better at it!  |
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| benzwong |
Posted: Apr 19, 2007 4:07 am |
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甘えんぼ

Joined: 07 Mar 2007
Posts: 82
Location: Singapore
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Didn't you could draw bahamut!
At least a 75% for me!  |
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| slashersam016 |
Posted: Apr 20, 2007 9:48 am |
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SMILY

Joined: 04 Feb 2007
Posts: 384
Location: Quezon City, Philippines
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is it me or just my connection?. cause i cant see it...  |
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| cherrydreamer00 |
Posted: Apr 20, 2007 9:56 am |
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Happy Days

Joined: 06 Mar 2007
Posts: 109
Location: Phillipines
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? I couldn't see a thing... really... (nanti-trip ba sila?) or is it posted somewhere else? |
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| bahamut88 |
Posted: Apr 20, 2007 3:09 pm |
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上塩タン焼680円

Joined: 04 Jun 2005
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Location: Singapore
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| cherrydreamer00 |
Posted: Apr 20, 2007 7:40 pm |
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Happy Days

Joined: 06 Mar 2007
Posts: 109
Location: Phillipines
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oh i see... seen it, its good! ^_^ never attempted a human image yet... i'm more into anime.. ...(hmm why not make an anime version of her in her chu-lip suit? ) |
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| Clive |
Posted: Jul 20, 2007 9:21 am |
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桃ノ花ビラ

Joined: 18 Jul 2007
Posts: 5
Location: England
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| Nice drawing. It has character, and captures a mood, Clive (http://www.clivesprints.com) |
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| starri |
Posted: Aug 31, 2007 5:58 pm |
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桃ノ花ビラ

Joined: 31 Aug 2007
Posts: 5
Location: Canada
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It look really good for your first time!! I would never be able to do that  |
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